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Nothing is as beautiful as a rose,
A rose whose petals have withered and died.
Browned with age, the edges blackened by the sun.

There is no magnificence as such the dry and crumbling leaves.
Lethal and unforgiving thorns, reddened
By the blood that once was a crimson petal.

There is no loveliness like the death of a thing so perfect.
Life-bringing dew that dripped from this waxen green is now soaked inside trying to ascertain sustenance it will never again posses.

The seeds scatter to the wind missing their chance to flourish and grow again.
So the roots of a long-kept treasure shrivel and expire.

Too many oils from unkempt hands.
Not enough fragrance for a million inhalations.
Murdered, by necessity.
©2004-2009 *VelvetEchoes
:iconvelvetechoes:

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Wrote this a while back...all my poetry seems to come from some dark place in my soul.

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:icondarkvenom:
VERY nice. beautiful poem with awesome imagery.

umm, im not the smartest dude in the world, but i dont think roses hav seeds, they have pollen (may have just proved he is the stoopidist guy in the world).

but neway, i like the poem heaps. :)
:iconvelvetechoes:
Thank you so much!

And acutally, roses have both...ever notice that when a rose dies, there's a little bulb at the bottom of there the petals were? Break it open...there's seeds in there...It's called a rose hip. They make tea out of them too.

And I don't think you're stupid. :blowkiss:
:icondarkvenom:
>.< doh! well at least im learning...*sigh*
:iconvelvetechoes:
Heh...don't feel bad. I only know cause I come from the stix!
:iconfaraleigh:
Mmm... I love dark poetry and this is no exception. The imagery is awsome, and obviously thusly the wording. :D And it doesn't help that I like dried roses so much... hehe

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The higher you set your expectations and hopes, the farther they fall and the harder they hit when they're utterly crushed...
:iconvelvetechoes:
I have dried roses all over the walls of my bedroom...maybe that's what inspired this in the first place. Thank you very much! :blowkiss:
:iconfaraleigh:
Mmm... Dried roses are the best. XD Especially the red ones, looking like they're nearly black. hehe Perhaps so.. Inspiration comes from all sorts of places, I've noticed. :D And you're quite welcome. ^^

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The higher you set your expectations and hopes, the farther they fall and the harder they hit when they're utterly crushed...
:iconvelvetechoes:
Yeah, I get inspiration from all sorts of places XD . When I was younger I used to dry the roses and laquer them so they were all shiney...it was like...giving some dimension of life to a very dead thing. I don't have time for such things now, but it was neat.
:iconfaraleigh:
Laquered them, hmm? Interesting. :) I think I'd just like them plain dried... Look more natural that way. :) I'm all about things looking natural and untouched.

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The higher you set your expectations and hopes, the farther they fall and the harder they hit when they're utterly crushed...

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